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Nicole S

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One very darkwindy night me and my friend went out, for a walk with the dog.Then we heard a very lound scream.We were scard.Rachel said what will we do? we should just see if it does it again ok,then we heard a bang.We were terrified.Then we saw a stray cat it ran into a house  we went in with it because we wanted to see what was there.We heard another noise we looked in a dark dark box then we looked in the dark dark shoe and in the dark dark shoe  there was a ZOMBIE.We ran and screamed our loundest and ran our fastst .We didn't know what to do because, we could't see it.Then we saw it again and this time there was to of them.They were coming to get us so,we picked up a stick and started to hit them.Then 30 more of them came .Then the sun came out and killed all the Zombies.

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Miss Law said

at 11:26 pm on Oct 25, 2008

You've tried really hard with this animation. You've used a lot of different things to make it exciting. I like that your characters move and I also like that you added speech bubbles.

There's a lot going on in this one scene though, next time maybe you could split it up and add more scenes?

Miss L

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