Memoona A
Emily
Emily is 10 years old. She has two brothers and one sister. She likes skipping, running and playing outside. She lives in Carronshore. She goes to Carronshore primary school and she's in primary 6. Her favourite colour is purple. Her best friend is Alex but she has lots of other friends. Her favourite subject is spelling. Her favourite programme is The Suite Life Of Zack And Cody. Her favorite films are Camp Rock and High School Musical because she likes music. She has big brown eyes and long brown hair. She likes school. She likes wearing jewellery with her skirts.
Science
Today in school my class watched a video and it was about skeletons, people and animals. Your brain controls every part of your body and you can't live without a brain. Everybody has bones to help them do things. Monkey are a bit like humans because they are very clever. Fish have fins to help them swim and they can't breath when they are out of the water. Snakes have small mouths.
Wiki
Hi this is Memoona's wiki. I hope you like it. Thankyou for visiting it.
School
Emily lives in a cottage. She has one sister and one brother. She is 9 year old. She likes skipping. She is in primary 5. It was Monday and she woke up at half past seven. She went in the bathroom and then she came out of the bathroom and got ready, put her socks on and she wore her shoes she got her jacket, put her school bag on and went to school.
When she reached to school the bell rang and she went inside. She sat in the chair and a girl called Miss Bad was talking about Emily. Miss Bad has alot of friends and Emily has no friends. The first thing she done was maths her favourite subject she was good at it.
After maths it was playtime Emily got her jacket and got her crisps she had salt and vineager. She went outside and Miss Badcame and called her name Emily go very sad and a new person came his name was TFAS he came after playtime. He was a kind nice person he had lots of friends.
The next thing they done was spelling and then it was lunchtime and Miss Bad came and said names to Emily again and TFAS came outside and said why are you being nasty to her it is not very nice and Miss Bad said who cares. When TFAS'S frriends came they started being nasty to Miss Bad and she started to cry and TFAS said do you like people calling you names and she said no. Miss Bad said i won't be mean to Emily again.
Then every morning Emily was fine and she had lots of friend.
The End
About Me
My name is Memoona. My hobbies are running skipping ang playing outside. My favourite colour is pink. My best friend is Leanne. I live in Scotland. I have one brother and one sister. My favourite programme is the suite life of Zack and Cody.
The Magic Key
Once upon a time there was a girl called Alex she had a little sister and a little brother. Her sisters name was Emily and her brothers name was Kyle. She had a dad and a mum. They went to a pic nic on Saturday at 1:00pm before she went she asked her mum if she could go and see a movie the next morning but her mum said no darling i'm sorry we can't. So they woke up at 10:00am and got ready made there sandwitches, got juice, got sweets and got crisps. Then they watched TV and after a while they went to the pic nic. When the reached they ate something and went to play. Alex had never been to the park there family went. So she went around the whole park. While she was going she tripped over a key and when she got up she picked up the key and took it to her mum. While she was going she said to herself i wish we could see a movie tommorrow. When she got to her mum her mum said i changed my mind we can see a movie tommorrow. Alex got so happy. She told her mum she found a key and it is magic! Her mum said how do you know? Alex said i know because i asked you this morning and you said no and when i found this key you said yes. After a hour later they went home and Alex wanted a drink she wished for it and it came. She was so happy.
The End
A Letter To King Edward
I believe we should get the crown and the Stone of Destiny back because it belong to Scotland. If you give the Stone of Detiny and the crown i will give you 50 gold bars. If you still don't give it back then i will sen peaple to take it from you. Why should you have the Stone of Destiny and the crown it is Scotlands you stole it. We want it back. Scotland should have the Stone of Destiny and the crown back because Scotland is it's own country. If you don't give it back soon i will tell the whole country.
To be continued
Emily and the Dog
There was a girl called Emily. She was scared of dogs because once a dog chased after her. She had 2 brothers and 1 sister. One of her brothers name is Kyle and the other ones name is Sam. Her sisters name is Alex. Emily is 10 years old she is the biggest out of her brothers and sister. She was in primary 6. It was the summer holidays for 2 months. On Saturday her dad said we are going to Paris for 3 weeks.They were going on Monday.Emily, Alex, Sam and Kyle got so happy they were jumping all around the room. All the kid went to there room got everything they needed and so did the mum and dad. On Monday morning they couldn't wait till they got to Paris. They left at 9 o clock and reached at 10. When the were on the aeroplane they sat down on a seat and Emily was drawing, Alex was playing on the nentendo, Sam was listening to songs and Kyle was sleeping. When they reached Paris they went to a hotel, got a room and had a rest it was very hot there. When the family woke up they went to get ice-cream. A dog came and barked at Emily. Emily ran to her mum. Her mum said dogs aren't scary the are cute and nice. Emily said yes they are. That dog went away in a sad face. Emily said to her mum that is sad on that dog can i go and get him. Her mum said yes. Emily ran to the dog and said i am sorry. Will you come with us? So the dog went with Emily and Emily asked her mum can we keey that dog. Her mum said yes. They go there ice-cream and called the dog Lucky. The days went past very quickly and they loved Paris.
They lived happily ever after with the dog.
Maths
1. 5+5=10 6. 27+39=66 11. 8+9+4+2+5=28
2. 7+7=14 7. 99-35=64 12. 9+9+3+4+6=31
3. 9+9=18 8. 123-57=66 13. 45+43+23=111
4. 12+12=24 9. 345-123=222 14. 92+23+42=157
5. 19+19=38 10. 455+234=689 15. 111+234=345
Rebecca and the Evel Witch
There was a girl called Rebecca. She was 10 years old. She was in primary 6. She had a mum, dad, sister and brother. It was her summer holidays for seven weeks. So they went to France for three weeks. When they reached they went in a hotel. Rebecca and her family went for a walk. While they were walking Rebecca seen a man running. Rebecca told her mum i need to find out why that man is running and she ran after him. It was a witch that was chasing after him trying to get his money and she got it. Then the man stopped and Rebecca caught up to him. Rebecca said what is your name? He said my name is Sam. Rebecca asked him what happend? He said the witch she stole my money. Rebecca asked how long has this been happening for? Sam said about for three years. Rebecca said is no one trying to stop her? Sam said they are to scared to. Rebecca said well now i am here and i will stop it. I will make a plan. So Rebecca reached her family and they went home. Rebecca was thinking of a plan to stop the witch from doing bad stuff all day like when she was eating, when she was watching tv, when she was reading a book, when she was drawing a picture and while she was trying to going to sleep. The next morning she had an idea. Rebecca went outside trying to find Sam. When she found him she said i have a plan. Sam asked what is it. Rebecca said what you need to right now is get ten people and bring them here. It took Sam five minutes to do that. When they all came to Rebecca she told them a plan. Once she told everyone what to do they all went and did it. The witch came out her old house and ran after Sam again trying to get his other money he got. Sam ran as fast as he could. The witch caught him but as soon as she did the ten people Rebecca asked fo they came and made a circle. The witch said if you all don't get out of my way i will kill you one by one. Rebecca said but by the time you will kill one person everyone else that are here will run away. The witch got scared and said i can kill everyone altogether. Rebecca said well do it. The witch ran to her house and said i will come back but just before she went to her house Sam called the police. The police killed the witch. They all were pleased and proud of Rebecca. Rebecca was very happy because she saved peoples lifes.
Now the witch never did anything to anyone because she was dead!
The Magic Key
Once upon a time there was a girl called Rachel, her sister was called Nicole and her friend was called Rebecca. They lived beside a magic forest. Rebecca lived with Rachel and Nicole. They had a king who lived in a castle next to them. Rachel, Nicole and Rebecca were friends with the king. They went to see him. The king said go to the magic forest and find the magic key in five days or else you will get chucked out of the country now go get a move on, get your cloths packed and I will get food for you all. We went on a bike and beside it had two more seats and the king gave us it.
Half an hour later……
“Here we are,” said Rachel
“We’re here!” shouted Nicole
“Come on lets find the key,” said Rebecca.
“Were shall we start,” said Nicole
“I don’t know,” said Rachel
“We’ll go straight on,” said Rebecca
“Ok,” said Nicole. There was something shinning brightly in the distance.
“What if it’s the magic key,” said Nicole. “Come on lets see It.”
They went, and guess what it was, it was a treasure box.
“Wow it’s so shiny,” Nicole said.
“Let’s open it and see what’s inside,” said Rebecca. They tried to open it and it didn’t open they were wondering why Nicole went and said it might need a key.
“It just might,” said Rachel “but where is the key.”
They were searching everywhere and then Rachel stood on something and just before that it started to get dark.
Rachel said “come on lets find somewhere to sleep”.
They went on and they found a cottage and they slept there. It was a bright new morning so they went to the treasure box and Rachel remembered that she stood on something and she went to that place and it was a key so she put it into the treasure box. But it might not be the magic key in the box. As I said it might not, it wasn’t the magic key they were very sad. “It better be the magic key next time,” they wished. “I’m hungry,” they all said. They got their backpacks and took food out of it and ate it.
They go ahead till you couldn’t go any more and then they stopped. All they could see was a black stick. Rebecca lifted it up and it had buttons on the top and on the other side it says type in ‘the magic key’ and they did. After that they went into a different dimension.
Everything was shinning so brightly, it was looking amazing.
So they walked on and they were looking at all the shining, golden, amazing stuff. There was a big mountain like something was underneath it. Rachel said, “There might be something under all this cool stuff.”
But it was to dark to see, so they went to sleep.
They woke up with a bright new day at 10:00 and then they found some food at the corner and ate it because the food in the backpack was finished. They got back to work. Rebecca said “this is our 3rd day we don’t have that much time,” so we got back to work. Then they were finding great things, then they found a key but they didn’t know if it was the magic key or not and then beside it there was a note and Rebecca read it.
It says ‘whoever finds this key there is treasure inside it and you’ll be trusted not to lose it as I said there is treasure inside it. You have to be careful with it and it is THE MAGIC KEY’.
They all screamed.
“The king is going to be very proud of us”
“I am so happy,” Nicole said.
“Lets go back and tell the king how we found it and how fun it was,” Nicole said.
“We will use the magic key to get a plane,” said Nicole.
The plane came and they went. Once they reached they told the king that we found the magic key before five days and they threw a party. After the party Rachel, Nicole and Rebecca told the king everything they did and they told the king how much fun they had. The king was glad about how much fun they had and that they found the key. From then when they were board the king gave them something to do.
The End
Comments (10)
Miss Law said
at 5:54 pm on Oct 30, 2008
Good work Memoona. You've listened really well!
Rachel B said
at 12:44 pm on Nov 6, 2008
hi memoona love your wiki
Rachel B said
at 12:44 pm on Nov 6, 2008
hi memoona love your wiki
Memoona A said
at 12:45 pm on Nov 6, 2008
thanks
Rachel B said
at 12:47 pm on Nov 6, 2008
thank for the comment
Miss Law said
at 7:51 pm on Nov 6, 2008
Good to see you and Rachel are using your wikis!
Miss Law said
at 11:28 pm on Nov 13, 2008
Great work Memoona, you've really thought about your character!
Miss Law said
at 7:45 pm on Feb 9, 2009
I like your story, well done for trying to use different paragraphs!
Maybe you could change the colour and style of your fonts?
Memoona A said
at 10:43 pm on Feb 22, 2009
Ok Miss Law i'll change the colour
Memoona A said
at 10:43 pm on Feb 22, 2009
Ok Miss Law i'll change the colour
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