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Emma H

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What inspired you to run a blog ?

 

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Afew weeks ago me,Jaimey,Memoona and Paul went to Camelon Educatoin Centre and we had to teach teachers how to work it  I REALLY ENJOYED DOING IT  it was much more exciting than we thought it would be i hope Jaimey, Memoona and Paul enjoyed it to

 

My wiki

 

Hello everybody this is my wiki.My name is Emma.My friends are Jaimey, Rachel,Nicole R, Niamh H, and much much more .

 

The plan about Tanyas story

 

Once upon a time there was a girl called Tanya. She lived in a kingdom right next to an abandid kingdom.Her best friends are decetive bob he wears a black and brown hat .She has many more yet to be discovered. Dectective bob goes on adventure.He goes to the abandid kingdom.

 

My favourite things

 

My favourite sport is ice skating and football they are good sports for your legs.My favourite thing to eat is fish and fish give you brains.

My favourite song is So What  by P!nk.My favourite actresses are Miley Cyrus, Meryl Streep, Michelle Pfeiffer and Emma Roberts.  My favourite films are Hairspray, One fine day , Cat woman , Stardust, I am sam, Mamma Mia,St Trinians, Nancy Drew,Transformers,What lies beneath, Shes the man and hannah montana meet miley cyrus 3d move

 

 

Tanya

 

My girls name is Tanya she is 7 years old. She is very shy but clever.She skipped 4 years in school . She has purple glasses and blue eyes.She has ginger hair and always wears it in buches and it is in a jaggy style. She is a very small person and her nickname is Teeny because she is very small.She has one brother and one sister.She is good at climbing and her best friend is called Bob .She gets bullied alot because she is small . Tanya wears a pink and purple top with a big green and yellow flower on it and blue jeans . Tanya is a very poor person . She has very big eyes because she stays close to the teacher and she is a suck up. She knows everything in in the world .Tanya  hates being by herself. Tanya always copies people except in work . Tanya wants to be very tough.She wants to be like the school bully.Tanya wants to be tall because no one ever see's her.Her favourite colour is pink and blue.

 

                                                                               by emma

 

 

 

   

 

Science

 

Today in science we were talking about contenents . There are 7 continenints in the world and the are Asia,North America, South America , Europe, Africa, Antartica and Australasia. It was fun .     

 

                              by emma       

 

 

poppies

 

Today in school it was the 11 month the 11 day ofthe 11 hour at 11 oclock our school did the two minutes of silence and in art we drew and painted poppies and they are all excellent. The reason we wear poppies is because poppies grew in the field after world war one 

MATHS

8X1=8         8X2=16     8X3=24       8X4=32       8X5=40     8X6=48    8X7=56      8X8=64      8X9=72    8X10=80

9X1=9         9X2=18     9X3=27       9X4=36       9X5=45     8X6=54    9X7=63      9X8=72      9X9=81    9X10=90

10X1=10    10X2=20  10X3=30    10X4=40          10X5=50   10X6=60     10X7=70  10X8=80    10X9=90       10X10=100

 

 

NATURAL DISASTERS 

today in school we were learning about natural disasters floods can kill alot of people .rivers can have very strong currents which is called a Zuami . One day a volcano eruppted  with ash high enough to cover the empire state building. 

 

MOLLY

at school me and brogan were walking a paper doll called molly round the school taking pictures of it doing stuff . it was really fun !!! she was reading , typeing,drawing ,sitting,printing and rubbing out it was really fun

 

VERTABRAE AND IN VERTABRAE

Today in school we were learning about vertebrae and invertebrae. A ladybird is a invertebrae and a human is a vertebrae. We were learning about organs as well  they are the heart the brain lungs liver kidneys.The lungs and the heart is protected by your rib cage and your brain is protected by your skull . In your arm you have a humourus which is your funny bone. which is a very long bone.The radius which is joined by your elbow.You also have a spine which runs right down your back . Your spine is connected to your brain that is how the messages are sent up and down your body. Your elbow is a hinge joint and so is your knee. The tibia and the fibula are the two bones in your leg.When you are a baby you have 300 bones and when you are bigger you have 206 bones .the biggest bone in the human body is the fibula. Your brain is split into two halfs and is atached by like a little bridge.thats all for now bye 

 

                                     by emma   

 

The Abanded Village 

 

 

One pitch dark night a boy called Detective Bob got a letter from his work. He had to go to a abanded village with one person. He picked a girl called Tanya a very small and a very shy. They had to go to the abanded village in the morning. So they packed their bags with detective gear , spy gear and food. In the morning they went to the castle. The castle was grey with a red and white flag. There was little white houses. Tanya and Detective Bob looked in the houses to see if anyone lived in them but no-one. So they checked the big brick castle. When they got in it they heard a low loud voice. They looked up and saw a giant they ran for the door. Tanya looked down in the ground and saw footprints . She told Detective Bob and they both followed them. The footprints lead to a cage. In the cage there was a dragon it was called Spook. Detective Bob got a laser ring out and melted the cage. Spook said to Tanya and Detective Bob " Thank you for saving me." Tanya gave Spook some dragon biscuits she had found on the way. Then Spook said," an awful giant dragged me into this cage . "  Tanya had an idea to climb up the side of the castle. Detective Bob said" Who are we going to climb up it ? " Then Tanya said " climb up a rope. " So they all did that . They got into the castle and killed the giant. They all went home and livedhappily ever after. 

 

 

The  magic key

 

Once upon a time there was a girl called Ella she had brown hair and brown eyes. Ella had a friend called Lucy she had blonde hair and blue eyes . They were very pretty girls. Ella was a poor girl and very adventrous and Lucy was poor but good at making stuff. One day Ella and Lucy got told to go to the castle . The king said " i heard you go on adventures so i want you to find my magic key you have to find it . To find it you need to travel nearly everywhere. You have a week to find the key or you will be feeden to the crocodiles. your time will start tommorow so back your bags . So lucy and Ella ran as fast as they could . They packed clothes , gear , water and other stuff. So it was morning time it was 5:00 they set of for there exciting journey. Outside the kingdom there was a forest infested with scary animals and trees. Lucy did not want to climb the trees but it was there only hope to get out fast enough. Then a monster came and picked up Lucy and  then Ella used her laser watch to burn it . The trees were invested with poison bugs. So they stuck on some gloves so the poison would not get on their hands . They finally got out of the forest. Up ahead there was a big river but not a clean one a very mucky thick one . There was big rocks in it . Ella jumped in the river but Lucy had a fearful face like they were going to jump in a shark. The river was not deep so Ella was walking across in the horrible water. Then she found some rocks and some sticks so she gave them to Lucy and she made some stepping stone to get across. They both got to the other side Ella was covered in mud but lucy was not. So they got some water and washed Ella. When Lucy said i feel hungry . They both went to find some food near by and they found an apple tree so they sat down for a little break . It was already 12:00 . Some bad giants came and they were huge the girls did not know what to do. Ella shouted at Lucy to climb up the tree  so they could hide from the giants . The big giants noticed them and they said " YUMMM FOOD .The girls were terrified so Ella jumped out of the tree but Lucy did not move Ella shouted " GET DOWN LUCY OR THEY WILL EAT YOU." Lucy jumped out and landed on her head . When Ella looked Lucy was rolling down the hill shouting " OH OH OH OH OH OH OH OUCH " .Ella ran for her because the hill landed in the sea and it was freezing but it was to late Lucy was already in the sea . Ella was very scared she did not know what to do so she just jumed in and seen Lucy at the bottom unconcious so Ella grabbed her and swam up onto the shore. Lucy's skin was blue because she was so cold . Ella kept her warm by putting her in the cover she was sleeping with so her skin was turning to normal. Lucy woke up and it was 6:00 at night so they found a good spot and got some firewood and set up for the night . They woke up at 4:00 am and started to walk on they came to a garden . It was beautiful filled with roses sunflowers green grass  and lots of other flowers and beautiful stuff.Lucy ran to the roses .Ella knew there was something there so she kicked her old football and then it blew up so she put on her laser seing glasses and they were spread right across the garden. So Ella put on some music and twisted and turned and leaped all over the place.  Then she turned off the lasers by a red button. Ella turned them off so Lucy could get across. Lucy was very stiff from rolling into the river so she could not do all that. So they ran out of the garden. They then came to a place with big big big big stuff. Ella got out her map and seen they were in Giantville. Then they seen a ginormous spider .then Lucy ran like a headless chicken because she was scared of spiders .Then Ella seen her stop so she ran like the wind to Lucy. Ella said '' what is it'' Lucy pointed down and there was a river the size of the Atlantic Ocean. Then Ella jumped in then ran out she said '' it is freezing hand me my cup .'' So she filled up her cup with the water and drank it.They seen a tree the size of 56ft tall .The problem was you had to climb it to get past. Ella got her rope out and swang it onto the tree and then she could have the rope for support Lucy did the same.Then Ella jumped down and landed on her feet then she got her spade out and started to dig a big hole so they could go underground so it could be easier to find the magic key. Lucy shouted NO WAY THESE CLOTHES COST A FORTUNE. So Ella had to walk . Ella said angrily i want to get some thing of that king but you just had to make life a hole lot difficult. The girls got out of giantville . They then came to babyloen city. This place was a big hotel filled with traps and spies. So the girls bought a map of the hotel in a shop so they could see where all the spies and the traps were. So the girls acted like they were guests so they could get around the hotel without people thinking they were from the SSA . That stands for the secret spy agency...... to be continued.

A letter to King Edward

 

Edinburgh castle

Edinburgh

November 1296

 

Dear King Edward,

 

 

I am writing to you because i believe that Scotland should get the crown and the Stone of Destiny back because we feel it is important to the Scots. Could we trade you something for the crown and the Stone of Destiny ? I am willing to pay 40 gold bars in exchange for the crown and the Stone of Destiny.

 

        Us Scots feel that those two things are very impotant.If you do not we will send an army to try and attack you. As i have explained you have two options , to get attacked or 40 gold bars. If you refuse this offer, when the army attacks you we will steel the crown and the Stone of Destiny back .

 

 

Yours sincerly ,

Jessie Robertson        

 

childrens rights.

1 Providing legal protection for children against the worst forms of exploitation. 

 

Comments (19)

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Rachel B said

at 11:47 am on Oct 23, 2008

i wrote your poem when you where off
from rachelb

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Miss Law said

at 11:21 pm on Oct 25, 2008

This is a fantastic poem Emma, well done! You've painted great word pictures!

Miss L

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Miss Law said

at 5:22 pm on Oct 30, 2008

All fixed! :)

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Miss Law said

at 6:57 pm on Oct 30, 2008

Wow! Lots of information here Emma! Well done!

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margaret vass said

at 10:22 pm on Oct 30, 2008

That was great, Emma! Loved the bit about the spine being connected to the brain - I didn't know that fact.

Thanks - I hope that you keep writing on your wiki :-)

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Memoona A said

at 12:47 pm on Nov 6, 2008

hi emma love your wiki

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Rachel B said

at 6:18 pm on Nov 6, 2008

hi emma i love your wiki

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Rachel B said

at 6:18 pm on Nov 6, 2008

hi emma i love your wiki

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Emma H said

at 5:43 pm on Nov 7, 2008

thank you guys

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Miss Law said

at 12:44 am on Nov 8, 2008

Well done for posting on your wiki about Molly!

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Rachel B said

at 2:09 pm on Nov 8, 2008

i like your rock you

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Miss Law said

at 7:17 pm on Nov 10, 2008

Those facts are really interesting! Maybe you could give each of your posts a heading to make it easier to read?

Miss L

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Emma H said

at 4:59 pm on Nov 11, 2008

ok miss law i have already done it thanks for the advice

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Emma H said

at 7:38 pm on Nov 11, 2008

thanks rachel and memoona your wikis are cool too

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Miss Law said

at 8:36 pm on Nov 11, 2008

No problem Emma, your wiki is really taking shape, you've been working very hard! Keep up the good work!

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Miss Law said

at 11:30 pm on Nov 13, 2008

Great work Emma, you've really thought about your character!

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Memoona A said

at 10:10 pm on Mar 13, 2009

great wiki emma!

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Jack W said

at 8:36 am on Apr 30, 2009

whats the capital of australia lol

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Emma H said

at 9:17 pm on Jun 11, 2009

hi guys how are you

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